Fernandezm: Suggestions resulting from proof reading Spanish translation of article "10 Reasons I'm Thankful for the God Breathed Bible/es

2008-02-10T22:11:52Z

Suggestions resulting from proof reading Spanish translation of article "10 Reasons I'm Thankful for the God Breathed Bible/es

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-	==Formatting Comments==	+	== Formatting Comments for "10 Reasons I'm Thankful for the God Breathed Bible" article - Spanish Translation<br> ==
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		+	I truly enjoyed proof-reading the above mentioned article.  I could not have performed the translation any better, myself.
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		+	In my opinion, Leticia Buffa did an excellent job in capturing the essence of this article.
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		+	As suggested by Charissa, I used "La Biblia de Las Americas (LBLA), as my reference to proof read.
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		+	The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the translation, but nevertheless I would appreciate a third party's opinion on such.
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		+	I will proceed by identifying the modification(s) per item number as listed in the article.
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		+	1. "La Biblia '''aviva''' la fe, fuente de toda obediencia."
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		+	Instead of "aviva" I believe that "'''despierta'''" reflects the term "awakens" in a truer manner.
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		+	Aviva is more in toon with "stimulates".
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		+	3.  La Biblia libera de Satanas.
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		+	At the end of the first sentence, I would add the following:
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		+	"'''al ser insultado'''".
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		+	6.  La Biblia brinda amor.
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		+	After reviewing 1 Timothy 1:5 in the LBLA, perhaps the following will be closer to the LBLA translation:
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		+	"Pero el propo'sito de nuestra instruccio'n es el amor nacido de un corazo'n puro, de una buena conciencia y de una fe sincera. (1 Timoteo 1:5)"
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		+	'''Please note''' that the accent needs to go directly over the vowel "o" in all cases above.  I am not sure of how to set my keyboard to Spanish.
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		+	Would appreciate help in this department. :-)
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		+	7. La Biblia salva.
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		+	Once again, after reviewing the passage in the LBLA, I believe that the following would be a closer translation to the LBLA:
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		+	"Ten cuidado de ti mismo y de la ensen~anza; persevera a todo ello, porque asi' asegurara's tu savacio'n y la salvacio'n de los que te escuchen. (1 Timoteo 4:16)"
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		+	"Con toda perversidad engan~ara' y hara fallecer a los que se pierden por haberse negado a amar la verdad y asi' ser salvos. (2 Tesalonicenses 2:10)"
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		+	9. La Biblia revela as Sen~or.
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		+	I believe that the LBLA translation can be used as is, in this instance:
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		+	"Y el SEN~OR se volvio' a aparecer en Silo; porque el SEN~OR se revelaba a Samuel en Silo por la palabra del SEN~OR. (1 Samuel 3:21)"
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		+	Please advise me on my approach to proof reading this article.  I welcome all suggestions for improvement.
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		+	I aplogize for not having started sooner.  At present I am planning to dedicate a couple of hours every Sunday to continue the proof reading effort, if this is acceptable.
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		+	In Christ's Love,
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		+	Marina

Mahra at 20:34, 18 January 2008

2008-01-18T20:34:20Z

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