Fernandezm at 23:37, 12 March 2008

2008-03-12T23:37:57Z

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-	Once again I must congratulate the translator (this time - Dorval A. Lara Riveroll) for a job well done.  :-)	+	Once again I must congratulate the translator (this time - Dorval A. Lara Riveroll) for a job well done.  :-)

	The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the translation, but as always I would appreciate a third party's opinion on such.		The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the translation, but as always I would appreciate a third party's opinion on such.
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	I will proceed by identifying the modification(s) per paragraph number.		I will proceed by identifying the modification(s) per paragraph number.

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	Paragraph #1 => change "'''lo''' discípulos" to "'''los''' discípulos"  - (plural)		Paragraph #1 => change "'''lo''' discípulos" to "'''los''' discípulos"  - (plural)
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	change "'''p'''alabra" to "'''P'''alabra"		change "'''p'''alabra" to "'''P'''alabra"

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	Paragraph #3 => change "Por tanto" to "Por '''lo''' tanto".		Paragraph #3 => change "Por tanto" to "Por '''lo''' tanto".

-		+	<br>

	Paragraph #6 => Change third sentence to "Si '''ellos hubieran'''pensado en la oración como algo que se '''podía''' hacer mientras se '''lavaban''' los platos o se '''preparaba''' la comida ( o se '''manejaba''' un coche entre hospitales) entonces no '''hubieran visto''' el poner la mesa como una verdadera amenaza."		Paragraph #6 => Change third sentence to "Si '''ellos hubieran'''pensado en la oración como algo que se '''podía''' hacer mientras se '''lavaban''' los platos o se '''preparaba''' la comida ( o se '''manejaba''' un coche entre hospitales) entonces no '''hubieran visto''' el poner la mesa como una verdadera amenaza."

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	Paragraph #7 => Fourth sentence is missing the accent mark above the "u" in '''Jesús.'''		Paragraph #7 => Fourth sentence is missing the accent mark above the "u" in '''Jesús.'''

-	'''                        '''change "significat'''e'''ivas" to "'''significativas'''".	+	'''                        '''change "significat'''e'''ivas" to "'''significativas'''".

-	~~'''''~~'	+	'

	In Christ's Love,		In Christ's Love,
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	Marina		Marina

-	~~'''''~~'	+	'

Fernandezm: New page: Once again I must congratulate the translator (this time - Dorval A. Lara Riveroll) for a job well done. :-) The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the transla...

2008-03-09T20:49:00Z

New page: Once again I must congratulate the translator (this time - Dorval A. Lara Riveroll) for a job well done. :-) The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the transla...

New page

Once again I must congratulate the translator (this time - Dorval A. Lara Riveroll) for a job well done.  :-)

The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the translation, but as always I would appreciate a third party's opinion on such.

I will proceed by identifying the modification(s) per paragraph number.

Paragraph #1 => change "'''lo''' discípulos" to "'''los''' discípulos"  - (plural)

                          Add a "''':'''" after ...."les dijeron"  =>  "les dijeron''':'''"

                          change "a '''quien'''" to "a '''quienes'''"   - (plural)

                          change "'''a''' ministerio" to "'''al''' ministerio"

                          change "'''p'''alabra" to "'''P'''alabra"

Paragraph #3 => change "Por tanto" to "Por '''lo''' tanto".

Paragraph #6 => Change third sentence to "Si '''ellos hubieran'''pensado en la oración como algo que se '''podía''' hacer mientras se '''lavaban''' los platos o se '''preparaba''' la comida ( o se '''manejaba''' un coche entre hospitales) entonces no '''hubieran visto''' el poner la mesa como una verdadera amenaza."

Paragraph #7 => Fourth sentence is missing the accent mark above the "u" in '''Jesús.'''

'''                        '''change "significat'''e'''ivas" to "'''significativas'''".

''''''

In Christ's Love,

Marina

''''''

Talk:Brothers, Beware of Sacred Substitutes - Revision history

Fernandezm at 23:37, 12 March 2008

Fernandezm: New page: Once again I must congratulate the translator (this time - Dorval A. Lara Riveroll) for a job well done. :-) The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the transla...